Excellent! I really could feel the hairs on the back of my neck stand up! I was a little sad at the misspellings, but then read your bio and that you're so very young, at 15! Total gobsmack! And it made your story even that much better for me, because the creativity outweighed the editorial sidenotes I especially loved the last paragraph where you took me into a whole new horribly scary world! The best is your very descriptive abilities, detailed enough to get me there and so impactful that I stayed enrapt until the very deadly end! Thank you for this 'Saturday Splatterday' (to crib from Chiller Channel)! I'll be reading more from you and expect that someday I'll be buying your books!!!
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