It would have been nice to have more of a story and not just enemy, friends, enemy, friends, kiss the end. I feel that this could go so much further than where it's at now. I do like what is there but I feel there could be so much more. You write very well and I'm sure you could take this to levels so much higher. Good luck and Have fun.
I loved this. It was very good, and had I been able to read it all at once I would have cried. This play is amazing I really enjoyed reading and I could read it again and again. It wouldn't ever get boring and it will always have a hook of sorts that will keep me interesting. It would have been nice had it been longer and more played out but otherwise very good.
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