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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was a nice early Valentine's treat. I "enjoyed" the very descriptive words you used each time she tried a chocolate. It wasn't really an exciting plot line...someone eating chocolate...but still you managed to keep me interested and wondering what the next piece of candy would do to her senses. I can also say the story definitely stays with you for a bit because right after i hit submit i'm going in search of some chocolate and i don't care if it's 718am or not! Chocolate...breakfast of the goddesses lol!
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