the language used here are flowing easily, it is interesting except some portion. The main aim should be such writing which binds the reader.
The writing should me more spontaneous & lucid. In fact then only a reader gives rapt attention into the story. keep writing and surely you can improve. it was a good try. you can write much better if you try sincerely.
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