Wow! Makes me think the house had a family filled with laughter and the occupants were brutally murdered. There are many things this brief poem could mean and this is what a poem should do, it should speak individually to the reader. Nice work!
Wow! Very raw. You did an excellent job of evoking emotion in the reader, I teared up reading this. I can feel your pain through your words and the flow is on the dot. Great job!
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