It screams deperation and heartbeak so very well done on portraying that. Basically im new to poetry and so I really dont know crap on the form of them but I got the emotions which I think is the most important part.
The only thing I could say to help which is so minor - There is a little 'i' which should be a capital 9 lines down the poem.
It would be really great if you could have a look at my poems and give me you opinion considering you have been writing them for 4 years and I wrote my first 3 in the last two days lol.
Very good writing. I felt the anxiety and urgency of the situation. Im from Australia so I dont know exactly what a W-2 form is but isnt anything that is missing or stuffed up about your tax a nightmare and a major stress attack. Keep up the good work. I got the feel that there was a lesson to be learnt from what you wrote. Even if you need to let someone handle your affairs still oversee what they are doing and that they do the job properly. Regret happens when you become too complacent.
Keep up the good work
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