huh. certainly interesting i must say. and with a good moral message. though to be honest i found the dialogue to be a little dry at times, and at others a little bit un-natural. overall i would say it's a decent concept and seems like a modern day fairy tale of sorts. hmm...fairy tales...*inspired* Guess i have to thank you now too.
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