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I will give an honest review of whatever you send me. Because I'm a grammar nazi I will point out any structural or grammatical errors, but I will also tell you how I feel about it, what I like and what I think could be changed. If you're looking for something specific in a review please feel free to tell me, whether it be plot, character development, or just simply if the story sounds solid. My reviews tend to be about 1,000 words, but that is not always the case. A 4.5 rating is great, but I hardly give 5's because nothing is perfect. If you receive a 5 then I was incredibly impressed with what you sent.
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I will take just about any genre, although I tend to have a sweet spot for dark, paranormal, and suspenseful/horror stories. I will take poetry and I will do my best, but I am no poetry expert.
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I don't have a least favorite, but normal history tends to bore me (unless if it's a history of something you've created).
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Erotica. Just because. Sorry.
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Review of Confessional  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What I like:

I like the line "August dalliance".
You describe show as white ash, which is such a contrasting and interesting comparison.
I love the metaphor at the end of baring fruit.


What I think could change:

It's "Barely sober". Barley is a grain.
This is just me, but with every new line in a poem I capitalize the first letter.


Overall:

I like this poem and I like the biblical theme to it.
Keep up the good work.
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