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Review of Death's Claim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow. thats really good. I love the way you gave traits to death. It flowed beautifully.I love the lion metaphor. I could see Death actually settle in the places and see the stake in blood. Keep writing that was perfect. One suggestion would be to go in with a bit more detail like seeing the prey get killed or how Death kills or something. You dont have to but it may help to give a little enhancement of thought to your work. Love it. Write On!!!



Kathy
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Review of A Life So Cold  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamazing like it for the twisted and wretched feeling at the bottom of the stomach
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Review of hate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
oh come on a little longer and more detail plzzz
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Review of Scrap Paper  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
i like and its good but try a little more power and stronger words and try to explore new looks thoughts meanings and sounds of the words
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Review of Beauty Evermore  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
wow wow wow thats awasome idd say make it longer and ad some extra detaillzzzz to itttssss it is awsome i love it keep writting that could or can be the works of a real artist kkeeeep upppp uuuurrrr awsome poet and that is really superd no not that but exuberantly awsome
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Review of Death Himself  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow duude seriously thats awsssoooommmmeeeeee one sight suggestion try to not switch from differing point of views like going from first person saying "I" and third to "YOU" it is a little confuseing but i like it its reaaaalllllllly reallllly good. my other BIG suggestion is to KEEEEPPPP WRIIITTTIIINNNNGGGG love it
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Review of Fire  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
ummmmm woow thas power
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Review of Fall to Crash  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
omg LOVE it sis u rock and better keep rolling it love u *Heart*
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