that was so intense, the emotion you show through your writing is very erotic and fearfull yet so full of touch and emotion I feel like Im there with the one I love great job !!!!!
That was so heartfelt and raw ,I loved the way you were brave enough to out out all the pain you feel into words some people cant find a way to do it in such a poetic fashion, you are so brave ,thank you for posting this
That was an amzing story Very full of feeling,and love even though it was short ,you summed up a lot of feeling with just few words I think you should be givin a grand prize for this its realy good .
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