Takes me to a time in my life when I finally wised up got off my butt and decided to do something with my life. Remembering how long it would take the people around me to realize I'm not the same person anymore.
I'm sure many have been there and your poem speaks it out.
I'm new here to so if you get a chance check out some of my stuff and this one is wonderful...Keep up the great work!
I really like this one....I'm not quite sure if you realize that you spelled a few words wrond and forgot to punctuate in a few places...But the message itself is clear and beautiful..This is good.
Keep writing...I look forward to reading more.
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