That's a horrible thought. I barely ever text, but watch TV and use the computer and stuff like that. Jeez, I hope this never happens. Well, you're talented, keep up the good work!
This is a really, really good story. The plot is one that's been used before, but the way it's handled is great. I can see everything happening, and love how the characters react to them turning into, or seeing someone turn into a dog. Plus, each breed of dog chosen for the characters is spot on. I look forward to more chapters and Margaret's parent's transformations!
This is a great transformation story. This was the first story I read on this site, and it made me want to visit again and again. I think this defines a transformation story. There's a good reason for the transformation. There's the basic types of transformations, and no stupid weight gain. Overall, I enjoyed this story, and look forward to new chapters!
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