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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Firstly I'd like to say thanks for making me laugh out loud. I have to admit when I saw 'dramedy set in library' i did wonder how comedic/dramatic it could possibly be but I'm glad I stuck with it.

Genuinely funny; fresh and sharp dialogue, and characters who seem to already have good shape and potential. I especially like the comedic extras, so Angelo, Nancy and Jimmy, while Justin looks like a promising and identifiable protaganist.

I really can't think of much I would criticize; maybe a little tweaking of the more serious dialogue to ensure it never falls into hamminess but that's nitpicking. Maybe alter the description so that other potential reader/reviewers aren't put off the way I almost was, it'd be a shame.

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