Um...wow. This was both pretty and totally creepy.
I've always had a thing for dark stories and this is a really, really good one. Although it's bright day, and there are even birds outside chirping, I could almost hear the wind chimes and feel the cold rain.
It's a real thing of beauty, please continue writing and, of course, posting.
I'm not entirely sure, what it is, but there's something incredibly beautiful about this poem...maybe because it fits (even if just the tiniest bit) my situation as well.
Anyway, I love it
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