The ending! It actually made me laugh out loud. What I like about this is that you can actually envision doing this to a coworker or an annoying neighbor, although many people wouldn't. I guess that makes you a voice for the unheard. :) The line that states, " Will he ever stop, or notice the glop of potato salad on his chin?" is ingenious. You paint a portrait of an arrogant man humiliating himself. I would have enjoyed more description of the relationship between the two, the main character and Ralf, but due to the Lannet format, that's not really permitted. I noticed the technical aspect of internal rhyme when I read the first line. Excellent.
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