Hi. I really like this story. I like to return from time to time to reread it. This is one of my favorite stories on the site. I read some other of your stories, but this one is my fav. I'm not a type into female weight gain (I'm more into male weight gain), but, as I said, I like your story!
Hi!
I really like this work of yours. I find it really fine and nice.
It's a really good job, my dear. It's quite mind opening on the problem of government using money not in the right way. I relly hope you continue in this path.
You did a good job. See you!
Hi, my dear. Here I'm. I really like this work of yours. It's a good one. Not an expert on poems, but I like your work.
Did you ever think to publish your works either in some magazines or in a poems collection?
You are really good. Keep going, dear.
Hi! It's a really good job, ya know?
I'm not an expert on poems (I'm a short stories writer with a fat teen boys kink), but I really like this one.
I think you are on a good path, my dear. Hope to read more of your works in the future, my dear.
Hi! I really like this one! The only time I went to an aquarium I was a child. I never stopped to think that maybe the sharks and other fishes might start a revolt to break free, taking as many lives as they can.
In the end, I really like this piece. I'm really happy this will be published!
Hi. This is a really nice short story. I like it. I have a thing for adventure stories involving knights and dragons. Your story is really appealing, ya know? Now I want to read the larger story you mentioned in the description! I want to learn more about this Knight and his quest.
It's a really nice poem, my dear. I loved reading it! I'm not an expert on poems, but yours is so beautiful!
There is nothing wrong pretending to be married and have a child for a poem beautiful like this one I just read.
You are on the right path, my dear. Continue like this!
OK! You are on the good path to becoming my favorite poet. I loved the first poem I reviewed and now I love this one, man. You are super-good at this stuff. This is my opinion from a non-expert on poems. Did you ever think to publish some of your works?
Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.
It represents beautifully what happened with the COVID-19 pandemic that we are still living in today.
I love in particular the two last lines:
"So keep battling
This worldwide tragedy"
They hit me hard. Love them.
Keep going down this path.
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