That I did enjoy. Reminded me of a sci-fi piece I'm in the process of doing. Do you write any stories or is it just poetry? I've got a few in mind and have just finished the first draft on one. It needs alot of work especially with the characterisation. But I need to start somewhere. But I'd love to read more from you. Good job.
It was very powerful work. Felt a little shocked after that one. I've got to admit. It was very good but I can see you have a lot of emotion for the friend you're writing about.
Now that one was very good. It actually makes mine look well... I'm definately going to have to give that full marks. The imagery was really vivid. If it's not any problem, could you send me an email if you post anymore work. I'm new to the terms of writing and looking to develop some form of skill. I really did like that short story.
That was really good. Quite actually liked that. The wording was perfect. I haven't actually read that much poetry so I might be a little biased but that was really good.
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