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Review of Poems  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Keep writing. I'm not going to say I like, because I know it's painful. I will say I feel it, because I know it's true. Rock on. \m/ C
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked it. It's a little dark, which I enjoy. Very thoughtful, which is also pleasing. Good stuff. Don't change a thing. C
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Review of My Fault  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
First of all, you write poetry like I do. It is a very free form. I like it because I think my mind works that way.
The second reason I "like" this, is because the style of writing works well with the subject. Dark feelings and morbid introspection seem to work best in a free style.
The last reason, is because I'm familiar with the subject, so I feel some empathy.
Writing can be very theraputic.
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Review of alone, not lonely  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the topic and the way you have described it. You've taken something as uncomplicated as being by yourself and described it in a very stripped down uncomplicated way. Personally, I love my alone time. It's good to not have someone pulling at your sleeve for a while. Nicely done!
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Review of Boise City  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
One has to have lived in the flat, dry prarie, to fully appreciate the picture you paint so vividly! You do it beautifully with so few words. You can almost feel how lonely a place like Boise City is as it can see for unending miles in all directions. Wonderful!
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Having lived in Oklahoma for 20 years made it easy for me to visualize the picture you were painting. This is good stuff! I like the cleverness of "the winds of change". You can reference the ravages or tornado or time. Were you trying to do both? I also like the visual of the moon and star in the prarie night sky!
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