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Rated: E | (4.5)
Overall Impression
This is a beautiful poem. I was actually quite spooked out in the beginning by the raw emotion. It's got a very enigmatic feel to it and great emotional depth. I felt poem started out on a scarily desolate note but end with a promise of hope. I found it very moving.

I particularly loved these lines :
'Than being a vagabond
Lost in plain sight'.
and
'The barbed wire around my heart,
Is loosening.'

Suggestions/ Areas for consideration
None that I can think of.

This a powerful, profound poem. Thank you for sharing this and best of luck writing.
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