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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I wish it was a bit longer. How did she betray him? How did she know his plans to flee the country? I want to know.
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Review of Lovestories  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
I wish the story wasn't so short. I love the descriptions, but I feel like parts of the story are missing. How did you get to the village? What did the newlyweds look like?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The imagery in this poem adds a lot to it. I like the line about tickly whiskers. It gives off the impression that your grandpa was a very kind man who cherished his loved ones deeply. It's short and to the point.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't have much to say other than I think it's beautiful.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful... especially love the last stanza.
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