I wish the story wasn't so short. I love the descriptions, but I feel like parts of the story are missing. How did you get to the village? What did the newlyweds look like?
The imagery in this poem adds a lot to it. I like the line about tickly whiskers. It gives off the impression that your grandpa was a very kind man who cherished his loved ones deeply. It's short and to the point.
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