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Review of A Mirror  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nicely done -
As the saying goes..."With friends like this, who needs enemies?"

fountainman kc
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Review by fountainman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really dig the perspective on this...or the two perspectives, as it stands..one being told by the "ringer", the other by the "ringee"...
Most can relate to this experience exactly..we've all been alone with the lights off and have had an unexpected visitor of the night...
Fear and adrenaline are such a rush, lol -
Nicely done, Agnie.

fountainman kc
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Review of If God was a tree  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Nice thought, Agnie.. So many people don't even realize that God is in every grain of sand, or hair on their heads...
I thought this was a cute thought, if I may be permitted, as a man, to say "cute", lol -

fountainman kc
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Review of DoorMat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sometimes introspection sucks....but necessary at times...

Nicely written, my friend.

I will always try to treat you with respect.

You are my door.....not my door-mat...

Kirk!
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Review of Mankinds illusion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like where you're thinking is going with this...

Keep it up....you just might figure us all out!

Kirk!
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Review of damaged soul  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Me likee, me likee alot...

Write the pain away, babe, write the pain away..

Kirk!
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Review of my lost meaning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Eloquently written, CD.

Kirk!
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Review by fountainman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I guess I'm part of the minority...but was trained by old-school working men. I'll stick to standard, thank you very much! lol

I really enjoy your sense of humor in the answer fields! Kudos to you for bringing a smile :)

fountainman(k.c.)
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Review of Sorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a truly awesome poem! This piece really blows me away! LOVE the style...the "OUT" midpoint is extremely impressive - your poem transforms while still holding theme...I am usually better at explaining why a poem touches me, But honestly, I have been rendered nearly speechless.
Truly amazing work you have done! Be proud of this piece, for I am proud for you as well.

Thank you for sharing this great piece.

fountainman(kirk)
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Review of My Sonnet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A relly nice piece....I enjoyed that so much more than I thought I would..I must be honest - when I read the description, I hesitated to enter, thinking that a sonnet written for english class was a toss up. But I am glad that I did - I'd misjudged again.
I really like the feel of this poem. It is the one of the most descriptive poems I've read using so few words. The reader can clearly see what you are going for without being weighed down by wordiness and over-emotionality. Good job on this piece. Hope your english teacher gave you an A+ !!!
Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it.

fountainman(kirk)
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Review of Barely Breathing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
The reason I am rating a 5 is because I have similar experience with what they now call "mood disorders".
You have described exactly the emotions that so many of us twisted people feel/have felt. Thank you for your honesty in this piece and letting us into the private areas of your thoughts.

Great work.

Texas rocks!

fountainman(k.c.)
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Review of Speak Up Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What an a**hole is my first reaction. The reader almost wishes you would write a poem about someone beating the crap out of this character! Very strong emotion comes out in this piece. Well written and kudos on describing the thought process in this type of situation. Not easy to do.
Well done, Ma'am.

Fountainman(k.c.)
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Review by fountainman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. You transported me into your world here. I could almost hear the creaks and moans of your home settling as you lay awake listening. Truly very good!
I especially like the line about Bonds never judging you. Know what you mean - been there, done that.
Good work, sir.

Fountainman(k.c.)
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Review by fountainman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very gripping story, from the first few lines.
Good hooking action! I like this item alot. Well done.

Fountainman(k.c.)
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Review of My New World  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
i stand in awe. you have an amazing gift to transport the reader into your mind. well done, sir.

(fountainman) k.c.
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Review of "Fantasy Child"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
you are truly an amazing poet. i stand in awe. thank you so much for letting me see into your world.

(fountainman) k.c.
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Review by fountainman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
what an amazing description of the "little rituals" we all have in daily life. truly awesome, Kings. I felt as though i were sitting in the room with you; it was as if i could almost smell the dying wick.
amazing.

(fountainman) k.c.
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