Every expression is so touching，balanced and complete. The word choosing is also very appropriate and decent. From the words, I can feel a gentle, kind and caring soul. No such words can campare with the lines left by an affectionate heart and the perceving eyes.
Congratulations for the liberation in the end. It is true that we value too much on the things means little to us and neglect too much that really matters to us. It seems that as a man lives he will never find the ultimate liberation desired. Children has children's restrictions, young people has young people's restrictions, and old people has old people's restrictions.
It is a very moving poem,and I like it very much. I can feel the love and care that person gave you as well as your deep love and gratitude for that person.
I think it is better to be ended with "When I asked, “Do you feel my love”YOU STRETCHED OUT YOUR ARMS AND DIED!
It is a very warm and delicate writing, and it is logically and personally organized and expressed and I can feel the real scenes as well as the the present and the past conflicting on you. I was totally engrossed in the story and can share the keen aspiration for the purse, the hard reality that Tony sensed, and the unexpected surprise at the end of this story. A a very happy and warm ending.
I think when the sister said“I don’t need to know anything other than you lied. You kept me from Jerry when he needed me most.”, she should be chocked, and hate her brother and she will never forgive her brother, because she missed the most most important chance that she will never bear to miss.
You are a person who lives with 100 percent effort, so you will surely make a lot of progress in your life. I can feel your sincerity in each word of your letter, and wish you good luck every day.
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