I really enjoyed your poem. I thought the use of rhyme was very cleverly done and you have a powerful message to portray. That first stanza paints a perfect picture of an idiot that is not representative of most men, but a throwback to a bygone era that has resurfaced like a noxious gas. That being said, I think your poem was executed very well and I thouroughly enjoyed reading it's message and composition.
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