Wow! That was a sit on the edge of your chair, stare at the screen suspenseful short story.
It keeps the reader in suspense that is for sure. Even the very end is making you wonder, is he really dead or not?
The details in the story really makes the reader see what is happening. Very visual details.
Great, great work!
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