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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you again for reviewing my poem "The Coming Age." It's nice to receive such kind words. I enjoyed reading this poem, and I understand your comment about it being "a little confusing." It seems that you establish a rhyme scheme in the second and third stanzas, but the first stanza is devoid of one. I would suggest restructuring the first stanza to match the rhyme schemes of the following ones. You have some very striking images here, especially the manifestation of your dreams as an ineffectual wasp. Keep up the good work!

Sincerely,
Across the pond
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