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Rated: E | (3.0)
You did a great job with this poem. It's just I felt like you could have descriped a few things in more detail. ( Like the rose on the rock, is it red, black, white, maybe it's wilted? How about the crude jokes...did the make her cry, hate, and seep down in the pit of all this pain and lonesomeness?)
Just try to descripe the poem a little more, make the reader know how it is...and how it's going to be.

Good Job
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