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Review of Thinking of You  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
This is pretty good but their are a few images that need refreshing. 'feel like scum' is a cliche for instance. try to use more detail and describe how you feel. for instance what does feeling like scum mean? that you feel like a criminal? like a pig rolling around in pig slop?

stop and think and be creative. try to say something no one has ever said before.
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