The dialog only approach is interesting, but makes it feel as though the story is lacking something, the sudden jump from one location to another as suggested by the dialog is... a bit confusing, it makes things feel like they are happening too quickly.
The plot is fairly straight forward and aside from the formatting is not entirely spectacular. My eyes got bored with reading this and I had to force myself to go back and read bits of it.
There isn't to much I can really say about the story itself with only dialog.
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