I like the structure of the poem - it looks attractive on the page, and is not too blocky and hard to get through. I also like the final stanza, it gives meaning to the first three which arguably don't have much substance.
Keep writing, and I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving!
Charlie Carrol
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