This is very concise, but makes a point. I like the consistent rhythmical structure, as well as the way that you carry across a strong emotional point in so few words. I am always pleased to find exceptional poetry on a public site like this. I hope to read more from you and keep up the good work!
Good job, this is a very relatable poem. I like your use of figurative language, as well as your way of sending a specific mood about your reader. The ability to inspire a given emotion in a reader is very valuable to me, and i appreciate seeing it. It's surprisingly hard to find here.
WOW. That is by far the best poem I've seen on here so far. I love your wording, your consistency, the strength of the point you're driving across, your creative topic and pretty much everything else about it. I definitely hope to read more from you on here!!
Wow, very good story, it's very well written. I like the moral conflict in it, but wish it would be developed a bit more. Character development is fantastic, format is very good. I especially like the authenticity of their grammar. Keep up the good work!
Great Job!!! I respect someone who has such a great love for their children. In today's society that is hard to come by. Your sons should be completely ecstatic to have such a caring mother! I hope to read more from you and keep up the good work!
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