That is awsome, everything is well describe, I can see the images in my head, as it is suppose to be for good book, or article, it is well writtent, simply, honestly,
I learned that Cuban people are very nice, and I am not surprise at all, Canadians can go there since forever, and they also can come here, and every one that went to Cuba, were happy about their vacation.
Life can be hard there, but at the same time easier, because of the respect they have for each other and for the tourist.
I enjoyed reading you.
I can't help you with the spelling and grammar I am a French Canadian.
From my point of view that was awsome, it was scary as Fantasy, but also scary in real life because of the murders Krono did, especially the little girl.
It was fascinating, very interesting, I would not be able to stop reading till the end.
Well written, easy to anderstand.
In my point of view it was very good.
I cannot help you with spelling or grammar mistake, my first language is french
Very nice and potential true story, that happend to my husband because of his glasses, and it happened to me because of my clothes, so I relate to your story.
It is well written, easy to anderstand, a great ending.
Great sympatetic character.
I liked it a lot
Keep up the good work, I hope it is the first time I comment, If not I wanted to give you points anyway, I worked a lot these past days, and I am tired.
I can't help you for the grammar and spelling, my first language is french, but I know that your work is good,
The character as sympatetic, real normal people it seems, normal family life, and also normal thought for a teen like Nikki, when you feel not that happy like Nikky about cheerleaders, then something nice happen
That is life, I like what you wrote very much, It is clear and well written, I cant help you for grammar and spelling my first language is french.
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