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Review by Chris Faciarelli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very moving story. The narration is poetic. There was only a couple things I noticed that maybe didn't fit.. The word "snuggled" seems kind of out of place with the tone of the story. And "new born butterfly" may not be analogy most people can relate to. But other then that great story.
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