I like this because I can relate to this. To me if im waiting for someone It seems like it takes forever for them to get to me. Good word choice and describing words. Great Job!!
Awww.... This is so sweet. I know how it feels to loose someone. It definitely does not feel the same without them. Good Job!! Just remember she is in a better place. Always do your best at everything you do, she will always be looking down here to make sure you are on the right track. Keep your head held high and always be strong.
"(i will die for your sins if you will die for mine)"
I like how u worded this. I strongly believe that if you do something for someone that they should do the right thing ,and do the same thing for you when u needed them to help you just like when you helped them.
'Then I remember. Age is always lurking in the darkest corners.'
I can relate to this with my own personal life. I can remember when I was just a little girl,I all ways wished I had homework. The next thing I realize I'm older,I have homework now. It was all just around the corner,that I was once going to be older and have the responsibilities of my own.
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