A well written interesting piece having been written through the experiences of your daughter. I found myself almost living the experience with her. This must be a hard time for you being she is where she is. You will both be in my prayers.
A well written piece for having been written when you were in the 8th grade. Exact in its description of how one should live their life, never worry about tomorrow,let alone worry about what has already happened. Keep up the good work.
A very well written and thought provoking piece. I must admit that this asks a lot of questions that I too sometimes find my self asking. Keep up with your writing.
What a well written piece. It is truly sad when we lose a loved one but especially sad when it happens on a holiday. I lost my Mom right after the holiday season but I understand fully what your feelings must be. Hope you continue writing.
This was truly a joy and a pleasure to read,kind of reminded me of myself,as I myself was once that little curly haired redhead.This is truly a great piece,makes me want to go out and play in the rain like I too did as a child.Great job of helping us all hopefully remember a little bit of the child in our all.
I truly enjoyed this piece for I too can't sing worth a lick.My father always told me I couldn't carry a tune in a wooden buckey but that never stopped me from singing,I think I do it just to bug people.Well written.
Very well written,made me want to continue reading just to find out what he was going to do next. Only found one grammatical error in the first paragraph. The line reads,"he lied down on the bed".Was wondering if you meant to say he "layed" down on the bed?Wasn't sure whether or not you had even noticed.Otherwise,great job.
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