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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I haven't been around in forever, but I have some GP's to share...


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Review of Naked Santa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, that was definitely a different take on Twas the Night Before Christmas, or should I say X-mas because it's X-rated LOL!!!

Very adult, very funny, Steve..do they accept returns on this gift?


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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Except for always getting stuck on an X word, silliness is the rule in here!

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Review of Fun with Acronyms  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Krazy hard, or crazy fun, either way, you got 5 from me, Ms. P!!

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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Really? No review for the Castle yet either? I am seriously slacking off here! Another I&O with tons of misunderstood craziness, wildly strange comments and bizarre creatures. Or, is that misunderstood creatures, strangly bizarre comments and general craziness? You'll have to come see for yourself!

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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This I&O is a real dive, a dump, a domestically challenged food-wrck. But it's a GREAT I&O to goof around in! Dare to try the pie!

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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I've been playing in this I&O Forever! Think it's about time to R&R! It's a riot a minute with crazies, I mean, uh, other like-minded people with batty characters-I mean, uh, um, great personalities and yeah, an old bottle with about a hundred messages waiting to be read!

catty (Ya gotta love it)
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Review of The King's Planet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*gasp* I haven't yet rated this I&O? OhmygoshIshouldbewhippedwithawetnoodle! Seriously crazy fun has been had in here!

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Review of Desire  Open in new Window.
Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Africa,

I found your poetry to be in some ways very picturesque, in other ways maybe just a little confusing for me.

The third stanza is beautiful, my mind absorbs the intent and flickers of interest fire through my brain like wildfire.

the waterfall of Desire
rushes through my bones


However, the fifth stanza, I think, maybe a word was left out, for it seems to be missing the punch I feel you intended it to have.

i deep my nails into Desire's flesh

Maybe you meant " i dig deep my nails..."?

Also, one last thing, you have set this up as an In & Out - I truly believe if you edit this to be poetry, you will probably get some solid reviews for it's just not listed in the right place for people to find it.

Good luck and Write On!


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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, Black-Hearted.

Your poem is dark and very depressing, soul-stealingly stark. I would strive to say that may have been your intent and you succeeded.

I think though, that you would get a lot more reviews if you edited this because it is not an In & Out..

If you listed it as poetry, I would bet a coffin-full of rusty nails you'd get a grip of terrific reviews. It's just lost here being listed as an I&O.

Good luck,

and Write on!


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Review of Temperament Test  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beth Barnett loves YAHshua,

Wow this was really in depth. Some of the answers didn't fit me entirely, but chose the ones that fit me 'mostly'. I like the way your questions made me stop and think about the answer before trying to figure out what my answer was that most fit yours!

It was pretty neat to see the results - I came out "Melancholy Temperament". I sure don't feel melancholy-but I can and do exhibit quite a few of the stated traits in that list.

So, I learned something new about myself, thanks!

Write on,



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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Sora_Roxas_Keyblade,

I liked your quiz, but wished it were longer than 5 questions. Also, would like to see correct answers if I had missed any and possibly even a comparison to others who took the quiz as well.

Thank you for your hard work!

Write on,


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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
spidey,

This was really fun to take, because - surprise, surprise - I thought I knew all the answers and I didn't!

There were 12 questions and though not terribly easy, they weren't so hard you needed a masters' to select the answer.

All in all, I enjoyed your quiz, Thanks!!

Write on,


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Review of The Burden  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Early,

I enjoyed your story and was able to follow it quite easily-though I did wish for a little more background. As I read through I only found a couple of errors:

Mariel stubbled to the sink and filled the mug. (stumbled)

the rough growths and blemishes that covered were cleared away. (covered IT were)

Other than these two things, I found your punctuation, spelling and storytelling an enjoyable experience.

Write on,


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Review of Jingle Jangle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
stuckintime,

I enjoyed your short story and enjoyed the ending. I really didn't know what it was that Colin was avoiding until almost to the very end.

I only found the following minor mistakes:

It was the last time I seen my mother alive (saw)

In them screams I could hear words. “No…no…Michael don’t….” (those, their, or the)

On the 11th chime I turned and seen the boy, my brother as nothing more than a rotted corpse. (saw) (was)

There was still a flaky skin attached to the bones, not much but some. (flap of, piece of, or remove 'a' completely)

Other than these little things, I didn't see any noticeable spelling or other grammatical errors. I still ranked this piece 4 stars because of how well written I found it to be. Once you correct your mistakes, please let me know and I would love to come back and move it up another 1/2 star.

Write on,

catty
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Review of True or False  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
pretend1,

Well, I got both questions correct on your quiz, just wish there were some other interesting questions you had asked, like: Is rattler venom deadly to rattlers? Or, maybe What is the largest bird, or longest living reptile or something.

Write on,


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Review of Equilibrium  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A very thoughtful read. I like the idea of the story, as well as the slightly depressing inner dialogue of your main character-very dark and troubled.

You use your imagination well, and the small twist at the end does give the piece some closure. I'm left wondering how many people were in that little black book. Both the ones in red and black-how clever to leave me wanting more!

Keep up the good work.

Write on!

catty
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Review of Booked for you  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Very clever!

You have a good idea, but you need to work on the incomplete sentences. Also, if I may suggest, remove the bold, it's a little distracting and "chunky" when trying to read.

I did like your play on words, as well as the suspensefull ending. Nicely done.

Keep up the good work.

Write on!

catty
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Review of Casual Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.5)
I like the idea of this; however, there are just a few issues.

Run on sentences, spelling and punctuation. With a piece this size, it wouldn't take very much to fix it.

This is worth doing right, it has lovely imagery. Let me know when you are done and I will gladly re-rate/review.

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Review of A Horse Tale  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
*laugh* yes, I believe after a day on a trotting horse one would definately need a warm bath and a ducky!

Well done!

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Review of My Horse and I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I love the feel of a fast-moving, high-stepping, free-running horse as much as the next guy!

Well done.

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Review of Indian Pony  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I thought the imagery was nice.

I love Appaloosa's- I had one for more than 25 years.

Thank you for reminding me about her,

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Review of A Horse's Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Good imagery.

I felt the wind in the mane and the pounding of its hooves.

Nice.


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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Not competing, but I will help out with some GP's.
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Review by catty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, this was a really great review of a one of my favorite Classic Movies!

I thought your review technique very thorough and personable with annecdotes and tidbits thrown in to spice up the facts and information.

A well done review that I completely agree with.

Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

Write On!


catty

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