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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I give 4/5, because I think it’s piece of good work. Writer has a lot of inspiration and I’m sure that script after finishing will be totally great.
The history of a teacher, who accidentaly picked up a girl, who was his student. They had a crush on themselves and they can’t face reality. They fall in love.
The girl, Janelle, is a daugther of Trinidadian. Her parents are never at home. The teacher, Niren, is young. He’s twenty-one. He hasn’t got great family too. He has problems with his father.
They don’t even try to fight with the feeling. They can’t. They fell in love. It’s irreversible.
Janelle was eighteen, but their parents treat her like she’s a child. She can’t go out with boys, she’s got very big problem with their trust to her.
It shows that dating is hard, when you are stopped by your parents and fate. It’s hard when you’re alone without any support. The script is full of humour. I really liked it, because you can read it and you don’t get bored. It’s not finished, but I think it would be good, because start shows us skills of writer, who’s very talented. It’s a history which could really happen and it’s written in persuasive way. I’m sure that writer has a lot of potential and will write more great scripts.
It’s worth to read and also worth to record.
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