I absolutely loved this piece. I really enjoyed the simplicity and content of the poem. I love how it styled on the same theme to drive home the point. Keep up the good work. I love it! My favorite line is the opening lines because it pulls me into the piece, "You said I could trust you, so I did". Continue to write work like this and have a great day.
Excellent. Great imagery and metaphor throughout this poem. I really enjoyed how the piece's rhythm flowed together seemlessly. I feel it was appropriately titled. The piece posed some very interesting and universal questions. Overall: A plus.
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I really love the imagery of this poem. I feel that it captures the human experience of 9-11 from various angles; from people who died and suffered, to those that sacrificed their lives to help, down to those that had to endure the aftermath. Perfect.
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I really enjoyed this piece. I can easily see this piece being considered a classic. I like the pace and rhyme scheme. I like how it's simple but packs alot of punch and meaning in each line. I especially liked the lines, "Hyperbole's not meant to confuse, but rather to bring home a point and amuse". Keep up the good work.
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I really loved this poem. I especially liked the line, "Features enhanced by an angel's delicate paints" and also "Body held in delicate bondage by harness and tether". I love teh way you rhyme in each sentence and/or stanza while simultaneously telling a beautiful poetic epic. In short I enjoyed the poem so keep up the good work.
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