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Review of Constant endeavor  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You give me a feeling of a great writer in the making, keep writing.
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Review of New Kid  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked how you kept rhyming for 3 or 4 lines, it kept me engaged. Keep writing.

-Auburn
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Review of Ice Cold Regrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love how you used the metaphor of anxiety being water, it gave a nice effect. Please keep writing.

-Auburn
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like how you used your refrain, really got my attention. Keep writing!

-Auburn
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Review of mother  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A relationship with a child and mother is something special and you really showed that, great job.

Auburn
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Review of voices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Whether this is you talking or not, you portrayed the events very realistically, and your Rhymes were very smooth flowing. Keep writing, even if it's for yourself.

-Auburn
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Review of Wake Up Mama!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You have a very creative imagination. I really enjoyed reading it.

-Auburn
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very creative and sweet. Keep writing.

-Auburn
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Review of Inside the Moment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have a great use of vocabulary I've never heard or used before. You inspire me, keep writing.

-Auburn
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Review by ~Camrin~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your use of imagery is very good and not many people can rhyme with such a smooth transition. Use your luck to your advantage.

-Auburn
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Review of Commitment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing something so personal, always keep writing to inspire others like myself.

-Auburn
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Review of while i was away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your usage of spacing out each letter as you go down the page it gives such a powerful effect. PLEASE keep on writing!

-Auburn
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