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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very informative article. Thanks!
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Review of DADDY'S SHOTGUN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very well written, Ann. I can see and hear the pain in your words. Keep strong and keep writing!

Clayton
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Review of The Bridge Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I am not sure what the poem is trying to say. If I did not know better I would think it was written a 100 years ago. It lacks any relationship to the times we live in. We live in complex and turbulent times that are great fodder for poetry. Some people think that contemporary poetry is ugly and without beauty. But read as much of it as you can (some on this sight) and you will get an idea of what is being written for our times.

I would like to see this poem using modern language; show me the hustle and the gridlock during peak traffic, tell me the emotions of those that must face it daily. Keep at it!

Clayton
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Review of Never Was  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The poem flows very nicely. I particularly like these lines:

Nine thousand, million voices fade
and then they were, no more.
No trees were left to offer shade,
no throngs were left to roar.

Though the word "thee" in the 3rd stanza gives it a less than contemporary feel.

Clayton
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