I have been looking around in the portfolios of the other members of the Coffee Shop, and decided to check in with you. You had so many helpful suggestions yesterday for "Poetical Prose" so I thought I might find some in here, like I did in Kat's port. And during my search, I found this goldmine of "Dark Room" material! Now I see why you are the room's Scribe.
I think this poem is very cool. And I can only assume that all the verses were written by the various members of the Dark Room group. They are all very different, but all entertaining. Some of them are serious, like the one by J_Darling, and some of them are hilarious, like the ones by Kat, and CeruleanSon.
It's a shame I missed out on it's creation, and I hope something like this will take place again in the future. The members of the Dark Room seem to be a very tight group. I am glad to now be a part of it.
See you in the Dark, Lord Norry! And thanks for your suggestions yesterday.
I found your item listed on the Noticing Newbies section on this website, and I decided to check it out. The title is great and intriguing, and it caused me to visit your port.
Sunny, the writing is great, and I like how you have tried to describe a man so common he could be represented by a piece of paper. Be careful of your sentence structure, some of the statements seem a little awkward.
I enjoyed your work.
Callum
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