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Review of Devil's Breath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting poem, thank you for sharing it with us. Although each line is very short, they contain a lot of description and work together to relate the reader to the message within the poem.

The title caught my attention and as I read the poem I found myself caught up in each line. The poem flows evenly and smoothly and is enjoyable to read.

Very well written, I did not find any mistakes or errors; good job.

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Review of That's Alright  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a very well written poem that tells a story I think many readers can relate well with. I did not find any errors in your writing and enjoyed reading this. It moves along smoothly from verse to verse, it hold the readers attention and draws them along. The poem has a smooth, even rhythm that makes this enjoyable to read, and the message in the end wraps up the poem completely.

Well done!

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Review of Tomorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting and entertaining poem. The topic, time, is something we can all relate to. I found this especially interesting since today once again slipped by.

I did not find any errors, it reads well, it moves forward smoothly, and is well constructed. This is well written and well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very wonderfully written poem! I enjoyed reading this, it has a wonderful balance and flows smoothly through each verse. The rhythm matches the flow and tempo of the item and the rhyming pattern adds depth. Each verse is filled with great description and creates a wonderful image.

I didn't find any errors and found this very well done!

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Review of Never Bitter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
A very interesting and erotic tale. In it's shortness I found myself wondering about the past but understand it would turn a short story into a novel (possibly an idea). The story moved along at a smooth but quick pace, it held my attention, and by the end, I was not disappointed. The only thing I found in need of correction is in the line:

"Leave that sinking gas station Bart. Face it, its glory days are over. You've got to move on.

There's more than plenty of room in my home. Come, stay with me. Don't make me beg."

It's one statement, so it shouldn't have the space separating it.

This is well written, interesting, and enjoyable; well done.

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Review of Ladybug  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a fun poem to read about ladybug and their instinct to find shelter before the cold north winds bring winter. the poem has a nice, smooth rhythm as I read through each line. There is balance and flow throughout each verse, and the pattern of rhyming adds to the enjoyment of the poem. I also enjoyed the contrast between winter and spring in the beginning and the last verse.

Well done.

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Review of Grilled Mackerel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I saw this item on the Hub and followed the link. The image of the fish grilling had me even more eager for warmer weather and outdoor activities. The recipe, written in the form of a poem, is interesting and sounds delicious. I enjoyed the visual "ingredients" listed through the item. This is an interesting item, it's well written, and very enjoyable.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Everybody knows knock-knock jokes, a few are good, most make us cringe even while we laugh. You took this form of joke and turned it into a fun to read poem. I like how you incorporate some knock-knock jokes into this poem as well as some very descriptive responses. I enjoyed the rhyming pattern throughout the item, and I enjoyed how you ended it. This is well written and flows very well. It's a fun poem to read; well done.

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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very catchy limerick for St. Patrick's Day. I enjoyed this; it brought a smile as I read the last line. I like the rhyming, it's catchy and original. But the last line ties it up so nicely with not only the rhyming, but the play on the last word.

Very well done and proof that not all limericks need to be bawdy or naughty, and writing such is definitely not "fraud-ie".


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Review of Pop  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting little poem. I enjoyed reading it and did not find any errors in it. You use a wonderful assortment of wording to make this poem very descriptive. In addition to it showing a tense scene before the race, the poem itself flows smoothly and easily.

A very nice bit of writing, keep it up.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found this poem very entertaining to say the least. The imagery it portrays is adventurous, romantic, and funny. I had to read this twice, because the first time through I was too intent on the story and didn't pay any attention to grammar or punctuation. After my second read, I didn't discover anything in error.

A great poem, well written, and well done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome to the site, I think you will really enjoy it here. I enjoyed reading your mission statement, and I hope you find journaling here productive and inspiring. There are some blogging sites that you may find interesting and if you have questions, posting in the Newsfeed is a great place to get answers and meet other members.

I did find one thing in you're item that you may want to change, the word whit should be wit in this case.

That's another wonderful part of the site, reviewing for other writers. I'm weak in grammar and it's wonderful to have someone aid me in editing.

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Review of PERFECT NIGHT  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very lovely poem, thank you for sharing it.

I enjoyed reading this poem, I enjoyed the message it holds, and I enjoyed the rhyming stanzas. It has a nice, even flow and rhythm; it flows easily and smoothly. I especially enjoyed the ending stanza, a perfect ending.

I did not notice any errors within the item, it is well written!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this, I enjoyed the rhyming, and I enjoyed the emotion inscribed in the poem. It's filled with love's pain, something I think most of us have suffered. It reminds me of past loves and past hurt, and past sorrow.

I believe a good poem should be felt, and I did. I fond this very well done.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon your poem and the title grabbed my attention right off. As I read through your poem I enjoyed the rhythm of the lines and stanzas; the pattern of rhyming added to the joy of reading this. You did a wonderful job of describing love and the heartaches it brings, even as the love throbs on.

I enjoyed this, it's well written, and very well done.


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Review of Silence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a very enjoyable poem and very relatable for most readers. It's well worded, has wonderful flow and great rhythm. I enjoyed this as I read it, finding it brought past thoughts to the front of my mind.

You did a terrific job writing this poem, well done and write on.

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Review of "Don't Bother Me"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I found this to be a very interesting and entertaining story. I'm sure everyone can relate to the annoying fly and how difficult they can be to exterminate.

I was caught off guard by the gasoline and resulting burns; I wasn't expecting that or the results at all. It's nice reading a story one can relate to, yet still be surprised.

I also enjoyed your ending, which again, was a pleasant surprise.

I found this to be well written and well done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very interesting story; as I already knew, you have a wonderful imagination. I didn't look in depth for mechanical, grammatical, or spelling errors, but in reading I did not notice any.

The story captivates right from the start and holds the reader. As the chapter finishes, I find myself wondering what's to come next.

A very good start for a story, well written, and like always, well done!

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Review of Costumes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was very entertaining throughout the entire story. The dialogue is terrific, and the anticipation of how it will all end kept me attentive through the story.

It's well written, easy to read through, and I did not find any errors or suggestions. In all, I enjoyed the story and the ending, which completed the switch entirely.

Well done!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful story and very enjoyable. It captured my attention right away and continued to hold my interest throughout. As I read this, I found myself thinking about what was to come next, as well as how this would end. However, the ending was a wonderful and humorous surprise that completed this story perfectly.

Well done!


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Review of My WdC Story  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
After seeing I was tagged in my Notifications, I sped over to see what I'd done; actually to see why I was tagged. I read through the item and found I can relate to quite a bit of what you have shared and I believe many other's can as well. I also found it very interesting how it all worked into the present. I did find it difficult to believe that it's only been seven months that you have graced us with your presence and shared so much with us.

I would have given this a thumbs up, or more likely a heart, but I decided it is more deserving of at least a comment, even better, a review telling you how much I enjoyed this.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came upon this item in Read & Review, and the title caught my attention. I read through the poem the first time just enjoying the rhythm and flow as I took in the imagery you painted with your words. Being February, this poem reminded me of spring and the end to winter. You did a marvelous job of describing, using colorful words and a catchy rhyming pattern.

I read the poem a second time looking for anything in need of correction or suggestion, but I didn't find any.

This is well done and very enjoyable. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Crabby Dash  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this item on the Newsfeed and the title caught my attention and made me curious; the title did a great job leading me to the poem.

The poem is well written, clear and tells a wonderful story. The rhyming adds to the enjoyment of reading this and the flow tracks well with the crabs racing. This item is full of description and portrays an active image for the reader.

I did not find anything to add, subtract, or change; I can offer no suggestions. You did a wonderful job and created a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Bathtub Dilemma  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this in Read & Review and was stopped by the title. Interested I read the poem.

This is a great piece of writing, the poem flows smoothly and the rhythm is terrific. The rhyming pattern adds to the effects of the poem, and the word choice is great.

I didn't find anything to correct, this is a well written poem. Great job.

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Review of A Hawk's Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw this on the Newsfeed, and being Valentine's Day, thought it was very fitting; fitting especially for those who do not have someone to enjoy the day with.

This is very beautiful and touching, a poem I believe anyone would enjoy and relate too. The rhythm is smooth and flowing, the rhyming is awesome. There are no errors that I find, no corrections or suggestions to make.

A wonderful poem, great job.

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