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Review by Owen Foreman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
I'll tell you the truth, I read the first couple of lines and got bored. Try to be a little more interesting. I did notice you need to work on you punctuation a bit, not periods and question marks but apostrophe's and commas. Try to be more interesting.
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Review by Owen Foreman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, I didnt find a single hting wrong with this poem. It is an amazing free vers epoem that anyone woudl be proud to write. I think that you should continue on this, make it a story told in poems, that would be amazing, please, if you like my idea, message me, I would be glad to help
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Review by Owen Foreman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey Everyone
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