It is very good detailed, consise and very nail biting or that's what my English Teacher said after leaving it in class.
But more to the point, I thought that it was very good and that I want more stories like this and I would like to see you have a go at a story within this specification:
It has to be set in Afghanistan
It has to be with 2 People that are trying to kill a man that is trying to take over the world.
They must also be at the same time trying to kill a person that got them Disavowed from an Elite Taskforce because they know a secret that no-one else knows about him
and
They must in the End Kill both of them 1 by hanging them and the other with a throwing knofe to the eye.
If you could with detail and quality that would be really good and you would be a brilliant writer for thinling up something along those lines with immense detail and consiscion.
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