Wow. Awsome premise, great mood and setup. Your writing prouse in the first 3 chapters are masterful, I truly felt humbled reading them. Some type o's in the middle and end, but overall nice pace and intriquing story keep you glued. Can't wait to read CoN 2&3.
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