Hmm I'd say I loved the first chapter and I am hoping to read more, the name itself sounds very inviting, "Addicted" its great I loved it and I hope u continue. I rated 1.5 but honestly if there is a number between 1.5 an 2.0 i'd rate it that way =)
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