A short but meaningfull and emotive poem. Despite some of the words being a bit rush or sad it depicts well what it is trying to say. It is always nice to read a short but well writtem poem like that one. So congratulations, and i hope you keep writting poems on this website!
Very nice post and informative for those who might be interested in joining the Roundtable!. It is nice to see a group like that where people can share their stories and discuss about them. Maybe i will join too at somepoint, although i preffer more reading stories than writting them haha. So thanks for all the interesting info and good luck with the Roundtable!
Nice story and what a missunderstanding of the officers haha, sadly that is something that do happen nowadays so it is nice of you to portrait it on this story. Fortunately it ended well (not for the sister though) and i hope that Jim and Claire can enjoy their trip together despite the incident.
I just started reading it and i like it this far, it has many options of anime to choose and very fun storylines to read, i will definitely keep reading it and also it has many chapters to choose XD i am a bit surprised i didn´t found this interactive before.
Very nice interactive and fun to read! it has many different girls with their own personalities and way to act towards the shrunken boys. Although i have to say that until now my favourite storylines is Maxine´s going lovestruck over little Tom XD, but i really liked it and it is very cool that it keeps recieving updates.
Wow, a very nice and profound poem, i really liked it and how you used very meaningfull and profound vocabulary to descrive all the poem´s lines. Also it wasn´t to short or to long and it depicts very well the description you have to the poem. So i wanted to congratulate you because i really liked how you wrote it and i also encourage you to keep writing thinks like this because it is very nice to read.
Wow, very nice story, i really liked it! it was very nice to read how you depicted the dream and the whole situation and i also liked how you wrote the whole story idea. It also wasn´t too long or too short so it was very good, i congratulate you for writing something like this and also encourage you to keep doing it in the future because it was a very nice to read something like that so congratulations again!.
Wow, very nice poem and also a very descriptive one! it was very nice how in very short lines you managed to express and describe so well the forest and to depict it´s sight during and after a sunset occurs, i really liked it, and it also shows how you can write very nice things in just a few words or in just a few lines so i just wanted to congratulate you for writign something like this and also to encourage you to keep doing it because it was very good and nice to read!.
Wow...very nice and profound poem you wrote there!. I really liked how you talked about that river and also described it with a lot of precition and diferent sinonims, also how you compared it with time saying that "A river, just as time, has to start somewhere and maybe it is in front of us now". at the beginning of the poem and i think that it is totally true! you never know when something may start or end so i think that it is a very nice poem to read and also to reflect about, not too long but also not too short either so congratulations for writing something about this and i encourage you to keep on writing poems like that in the future!.
Wow, really nice poem. Very deep words and with strong significance. It was great how you could write a lot about something so simple and everyday topic as crossing a bridge that is something very common in big cities. I also liked that the poem was short but with great significance on its words so it depicted a strong message. I really liked it so i encourage you to keep writing things like this!.
Wow.... really nice poem, very deep and strong words when you use them like that on the poem´s lines. I also liked how you used some words refering to a "cold" or "dark" place as the poem is refering of a snow/winter queen. Every line is short but carries significance so i really liked it. Congratulations for writing something like this with those words! it was short and direct but also very nice to read.
Wow.......very deep story it really makes you think. And also very good narrative strategy leaving until the end the plot twist of the sister being the murderer and the main charachter being the protagonist. I have to admit that until the mid part of the story i thought that he was guilty and was just confessing his motives. But i had a small chill down my spine after reading those final words. And also it reflects a sadly real aspect of daily society that is people that is convicted wrongly and we may never know that. So congratulations for writing something so deep and reflecting like this i really liked it.
Very nice and reflecting poem! i really liked it and i think it reflects very well an every-day issue that is materialism and hos sometimes an expensive prize can like try to set the value of something and many times it does it wrongly. There could be awesome products but with sadly a too high cost attached to them by the producers. I really liked how you wrote about it so congratulations for doing it XD.
Hey, i just read your poem and it was great! your words really touching and full of meaning. It also speaks a great true about the fact of persisting to achieve our goals but also having faith that a bad situation will always end eventually. After all after the dark clouds the sun always comes back to shine again! :)
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