How wonderful! I love the legends behind unicorns. I am amazed again at your wonderful use of words. It leaves me wanting to read more. No doubts in my mind..you have a gift!
Looking forward to reading more in just a minute here.
I don't have very many points but these are so good that it is worth the sacrifice.
I am so sorry about your brother. The work is excellent. The only thing I would like to see different is a more positive ending. Perhaps if it would speak of what happened after a year or so. The difference it made in the family, community? I do feel the grief of the family, especially the mother. I was hurting with her. Very excellent job on the actual writing. I lost my mother a couple of years ago and can understand the extreme loss.
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