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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
All-in-all, this is a first-rate story. There's some bad language, but you warn us ahead of time, which I appreciate. You got a number of laughs out of me! Keep up the writing and let me know when you get published!

This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Aww... it's the end. Two typos, the only ones in the story. Thanks for the great read.
Geno Walked down the street a bit, and found the bus station. (Geno walked down the street...)
Geno glanced at the map for a moment, and then quietly ran down the hallway to the left, passing several unmarked, steel doors. (...passing several unmarked steel doors.)

This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You know how to get laughs! When do they get to Five City?
No typos or anything.

This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a great book! You jam-pack it with humor! *Laugh*

This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I got to hand it to you, you have a great sense of humor! You're also careful about typos. I'll be reading the next few chapters soon.

This is a review for the Hummingbird Forum from Breezy-E.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a bit weird like you said, but it's pretty amusing, too. Have you ever played Super Mario RPG? There's a Geno in that who's a bit like yours.

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