This peom is great. I like how its so understanding and real. I love it! The title goes great with the poem and i also like the way that you worded the poem.
I think that poem was good. The choice of words was good , although i got a little confused. I didnt understand if she was talking about this literally or not. I think maybe the poem is about a girl that tried to love someone or give them her heart but instead of that person loving her back, they broke her heart and maybe thats what she's describing in this poem.Over all i like the poem, because you can kinda relate.
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