I like the feel of this. It has a quality of loneliness, a feeling most of us have shared w/ the author. These are real emotions, that is evident. The utter hopelessness towards and up to the end, saddens me. Hope springs eternal, and as long as a breath remains....but, alas, sometimes a guiding light is present, yet unseen. Good writing, as one "newbie to another" welcome.
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